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Why do we need to connect to people,
yet are able to have the mindset to
hate almost everyone we meet.

Why do we fall in love with the unattainable.
And get hurt when the concept is fulfilled.

Why can we be surrounded with people,
yet feel so alone.

Why can't we feel happy,
but sad comes naturally.

What is the point,
when our life is not our own.

The writers and readers see meaning,
when they are blind.

The ignorant and disinterested will
not even see this.

And the world goes on.  
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Irishfury97 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Life really is a set of conundrums isn't it? Yet, it goes on. Thank you for this good sir:)
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jul320 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome kind sir
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Writer
There are so many truths in this that it isn't even funny.
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jul320 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Truth is relative. What is, is. (I don't know if I said that right, or if only I can understand that) 
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Writer
Eh, I think I understand it...
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jul320 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, good enough for me
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student General Artist
i love this! especially the 1st, 4th, and 7th stanza!
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jul320 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you kind stranger :D... btw, which twin am I thanking?
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student General Artist
nana. its my nickname. Natsuki Shinomiya (Super hug) [V1] 
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jul320 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you Nana :D
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Very sad, but true. Life seems to be a constant series of ups and downs, but I think it's important to make the best out of the up moments. Wonderful poem. :D
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jul320 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, making the best of every moment. Enjoy the solitude and connections with messed up people like you. Treasure the moments with the people you love. Make best of the company of people. And tolerate the sad, because how else would we know what happy is. :D .. And also, thank you. 
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is strong, really this is really stronk, nice!
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jul320 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
why thank you
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IyraEMM Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can relate to this. 
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jul320 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
[nods sadly with closed eyes]
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aisiomai0101 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
don't let negativity overpower you
will you let sadness in when she knocks on your door?
will you say yes to sorrow and let her come along?


yes, the world goes on and on
as long as your living and not just existing
i guess, that's the basic thing of all

breathe! relax! cherish every moment!
everything on this earth shall pass.

:)
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jul320 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Those two broke down the door and have been chillin' ever since.

I try. 
Even when I'm like this, I try. 
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